Shape & Redraft
Taking your first draft and shaping it into the book you're trying to write
You’ve completed your first draft — congratulations! But now what? Whether you’re unsure how to move forward or need a fresh perspective on your manuscript, this package is designed to help you refine that first draft and feel confident about your book’s potential.
This package is perfect for those writers who have a finished first draft but aren't sure whether it's any good or where to turn next.
What's included?
- Free Discovery Call: Let’s discuss your goals and map out how to bring your vision to life.
- Comprehensive Manuscript Critique: An eight to ten-page editorial report with insights into plot development, pacing, character arcs, and narrative style, including specific suggestions to strengthen your story.
- Margin Comments: Targeted in-line feedback throughout your manuscript, focusing on structure, clarity, and revision priorities.
- One-to-One Sessions: Up to six personalised 90-minute sessions, spaced to support your redraft process.
- Between-Session Support: Receive ongoing guidance via email or text (WhatsApp or Facebook Messenger) to keep you on track.
- Redrafting Roadmap: Clear, actionable guidance on moving forward with your next drafts.
- Goal Setting & Accountability: Stay motivated with a customised writing schedule and check-ins.
- Exclusive Discount: Enjoy 10% off additional one-to-one sessions for the lifetime of your project.
By the end of this package:
You'll have a revised manuscript with actionable feedback, clarity and confidence in your story, and a clear path forward for redrafting and revision.Investment:
One payment of 1,350€ or four payments of 337.50€ (other payment plans available upon request)
This covers the manuscript critique, one-to-one sessions, and continued support.